Score: 10

"Acheivement: Forth Wall Broken (or is it?)"

submission: Microcosm

date: December 3, 2009

I love this video! It was simple in art yet profound in concept. I love your character's acknowlegdement of the forth wall and interaction with it.

However, it left me with some questions. When how is that when he realized that he could get to work on time, he jumped into the "finally arriving at work" panel, but fell into the alley panel with the agents? That says lets us know that he did not get to work (which makes me question that panel title). Was it there because the writer knew that he would see only the panel card and leap for it, (with that being the only part he and we sees)- making it a predestined setup? Or was it meant as an alternate timeline/outcome had he stayed within the fourth wall?

It was also clever to have him come back from the dead by erasing and rewriting what happened. But how is it that he (or his consciousness) went back to the panel before he died, after the squence where he died to change it...

Thanx again for the great work- and somethings to think about!
Will you be possibly making a sequel or a similar/alternate work? :)

Score: 10

"Encore! beautiful!"

submission: Upgrade Complete!

date: June 25, 2009

This game was clever and well-made. Its interesting how you literally start from nothing- very true to the name of the game and build your game! I love the game-in side a game concept (object of shooter game, besides SHOOTING, is to upgrade you ship, inaddition to the game itself, graphics, music, menus, loaders, etc.)

I also loved the "game over" screens. The 'crappy' first one showing self-awareness' as well as questioning the point of the game. The second upgraded 'game over' = "win" screen was also well overdone...

"congratulations forever!!!!" = rofl

Thank you for such a well made, thought-out, simple but clever game

Score: 6

"It is I, Mojo JOJO!"

submission: MoJO Millionaire

date: May 12, 2009

That was the best Mojoi Jojo impression I've heard yet, also nice artwork. Just two things- 1) why did you draw princess that way and 2) it was kind of short. Some back story and some more contestants (like, oh, say HIM, or some orginal characters) would have made it seem more competive

Score: 6

"This new product coming to stores near you..."

submission: Kerri's Bigger Invention!

date: March 23, 2009

It was very interesting...

I liked the "preparation" needed for the 'invention', as well as (even more) the 'invention' itself... ;)

You had very good artwork and animation
however, you lost points on the nipples and breast play though animation though- it looked alittle awkward.

Could the 'effects' of the invention be reversed... if so, consider me one of the first customers ;)

Score: 1

"Uh, yea..."

submission: 18 & Kuririn

date: March 23, 2009

I agree with Harken88 as far as the hentai matter. The fact that you cut from the cartoon and added in your own animations, along withe audio was fine.

But where was the story, the plot? What was the point in showing that comet in the sky- or better yet, why did krillin just up and decide to come in Adroid 18 while she was unconscious?

No motivation on his part + no response from her= no.
why did you loop it?

Score: 10

"Marvelous- simply marvelous dah-ling"

submission: The Homeless Vagabond

date: November 18, 2008

Out of most of the videos I've watched since I've been here- this is the simplest in art and concept, yet the most beautiful and touching.
I loved the story and the simply yet expressive art style. I also loved the song- and how the animations often matched it- keep up the good work!

Score: 4

"wow..."

submission: Umeko Gentle Vampire DEMO

date: November 13, 2008

Of all places to be bitten! :( sucks for him (no pun intended)

Good graphics and animation but the I have to agree- that demo was way short